One night at Poternewton Hieghts
Characters
Bianca, Toni, Talia, Dom, Taffie, Kira, Jordan, Jake, Kai, Zak, Ryan, Luke, Paris big black alien
On Pottnewton Hights
Getting chased by Aliens
One day on friday night Kira and Bianca were walking up to meet Toni and Dom up Potty Hights because nobody was on the street and it was quiet, As they were walking up they met Jake and Jordan near the shops but they were looking for Talia, Paris and Luke. Kira got a phone call and it was Zak and Kai saying they saw something in Scott Hall field .
People will be taken over by aliens
A green light heading to the flats and then they all saw a big black alien climbing the flat with all the young ones and the group snook inside just to see where there going too, they can see them all falling out of the sky. The whole of the sky was red and it was raining steaming hot.
The killing
They heard screaming and yelling then they saw Paris turning into a Alien THEN! She picked up Talia and took her to the tip on the building and then Kira went to get a big stick to hit Paris with, she kills the alien and restores normality to the world.
Good imagination we will go through your grammar and spelling next week.Good start
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